Eddie Dervish - Revision history

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	Would be suspected of being a sabbat infiltrator, but he's way too obvious.		Would be suspected of being a sabbat infiltrator, but he's way too obvious.

−	Among his most prized ~~possession~~ is a magical, two-cup-size-increasing bra, given to him by [[Pierrot Francon]], who bought it specifically for Eddie from [[Liana Masters]] at an "occult objects fire sale" in Annapolis.	+	Among his most prized possessions is a magical, two-cup-size-increasing bra, given to him by [[Pierrot Francon]], who bought it specifically for Eddie from [[Liana Masters]] at an "occult objects fire sale" in Annapolis.

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 '''''Just''''' by [[Elder Gregorio]] of Washington DC<br>
 '''''Vigilant''''' by [[Mattias Roman]] Prince of Northern Virginia<br>
-'''''Revered''''' as Brujah Primogen of the Marble Court of Washington DC<br>
+'''''Exalted''''' as Prince of the Marble Court of Washington DC<br>
 <h2>Character Information</h2>
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 Eddie is known to be a pretty laid back guy. He cracks jokes with most of the gathering and generally tries to get everybody to not take themselves so seriously. Often he is comfortable making fun of himself to get all the Vampires around him to relax. He likes to invite all the stuck up Camarilla kindred to sit down and play a game his old prince taught him, simply called "Questions". The premise is very simple. In the circle, you can ask anybody any question you want, that they have to answer truthfully, as long as the judge doesn't think the question is inappropriate. Eddie usually volunteers to judge. <br>
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-When he isn't having fun with his local clan, he spend his time making an honest living as a car mechanic; owning a small chain of repair shops creatively dubbed "Eddie's Repair". Mostly though, he is known for his love of women, and his willingness to carry on a loving relationship with another kindred. Though to date all of his known realtionships have resulted in last fueds between him and the female Kindred. He professes that sex is the most human thing one can do, and if our goal is to truly remain as human as possible, there should be nothing wrong with intercourse. Needless to say, a great many other kindred find him crass, inappropriate, and just stupid for his penchant for bringing up this awkward topic in many a public conversation. <br>
+When he isn't having fun with his local clan, he spend his time making an honest living as a car mechanic; owning a small chain of repair shops creatively dubbed "Eddie's Repair". Mostly though, he is known for his love of women, and his willingness to carry on a loving relationship with another kindred. Though to date all of his known relationships have resulted in last feuds between him and the female Kindred. He professes that sex is the most human thing one can do, and if our goal is to truly remain as human as possible, there should be nothing wrong with intercourse. Needless to say, a great many other kindred find him crass, inappropriate, and just stupid for his penchant for bringing up this awkward topic in many a public conversation. <br>
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 [[Melanie Dervish]][[Image:Maybe Melanie2.jpg‎|thumb|225px|Melanie Dervish]]<br>
-Melanie on the other hand was a kid that still loves her daddy. I aint gonna talk about how I found her, but when I did she was all wound up in a Lilith cult trying to do shitty stuff to DC. We needed an in, so I ghouled her, and sent her back into the fray to give us information about where they were meeting all that jazz. She was down right pivotal in that cult being destroyed, so I kept her on. She is also a sado-masochist sex addict, one of the hottest women I have ever seen, and is completely enthralled with me, but that was only a small part of it. She stayed with me for a bit, and I stumbled across Right of Progeny, and she had been bitching about wanting to be a Vampire for a while, so I ran her through the ringer to make sure none of that Lilith shit stuck in her brain. She was only there for the crazy parties and rampant violent sex, and honestly, I completely understand, so I bit her, and we made it official. I took her under my Accounting, and she did a great job learning everything she needed to know. When she was Acknowledged, the dumb slut slipped up, and got put under ordeal by the prince for saying a comment about black people when the fucking keeper is black and standing inches from her. Now she stays at home till this ordeal thing blows over, and she can join the ranks of everybody else. I will be sad to see her go, but I feel like she will always come back when she gets lonely. <br>
+Melanie on the other hand was a kid that still loves her daddy. I ain't gonna talk about how I found her, but when I did she was all wound up in a Lilith cult trying to do shitty stuff to DC. We needed an in, so I ghouled her, and sent her back into the fray to give us information about where they were meeting all that jazz. She was down right pivotal in that cult being destroyed, so I kept her on. She is also a sadomasochist sex addict, one of the hottest women I have ever seen, and is completely enthralled with me, but that was only a small part of it. She stayed with me for a bit, and I stumbled across Right of Progeny, and she had been bitching about wanting to be a Vampire for a while, so I ran her through the ringer to make sure none of that Lilith shit stuck in her brain. She was only there for the crazy parties and rampant violent sex, and honestly, I completely understand, so I bit her, and we made it official. I took her under my Accounting, and she did a great job learning everything she needed to know. When she was Acknowledged, the dumb slut slipped up, and got put under ordeal by the prince for saying a comment about black people when the fucking keeper is black and standing inches from her. Now she stays at home till this ordeal thing blows over, and she can join the ranks of everybody else. I will be sad to see her go, but I feel like she will always come back when she gets lonely. <br>
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 Melanie is a Vampire straight out of the movies. She is a rock solid babe, who wears tight leathers and miniskirts. This chick loves the black motorcycle and Japanese swords mixed with fully automatic weaponry, and a side of crazy Kung Fu shit I never taught her. I swear she would give Kate Beckinsale a run for her money if they ever do Underworld again. Her cliché does get on my nerves sometimes, but hey I am a leather jacket wearing Brujah car mechanic; I can't be too upset about clichés without being a total douche.<br>
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 Would be suspected of being a sabbat infiltrator, but he's way too obvious.

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 '''''Feared''''' by Prince [[Alexander Monroe]] of Washington DC<br>
 '''''Just''''' by [[Elder Gregorio]] of Washington DC<br>
-'''''Vigilant''''' by [[Mattias Roman]] Rince of Northern Virginia<br>
+'''''Vigilant''''' by [[Mattias Roman]] Prince of Northern Virginia<br>
-'''''Revered''''' as Brujah Primogen of the marble Court of Washington DC<br>
+'''''Revered''''' as Brujah Primogen of the Marble Court of Washington DC<br>
 <h2>Character Information</h2>

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 ==Rumors==
 Secretly in love with [[Kate Davidson]]. It's why they fight so much.
 Would be suspected of being a sabbat infiltrator, but he's way too obvious.

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	Secretly in love with [[Kate Davidson]]. It's why they fight so much.		Secretly in love with [[Kate Davidson]]. It's why they fight so much.
		+	Would be suspected of being a sabbat infiltrator, but he's way too obvious.

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 '''''Acknowledged''''' by [[Saul Good]], Prince of Springfield Illinois<br>
 '''''Dedicated''''' by Prince [[Lumen Gunn]] of Washington DC<br>
-'''''Faithful''''' by Prince [[Alexander Monroe]] of Washington DC<br>
+'''''Feared''''' by Prince [[Kate Davidson]] of Washington DC<br>
 '''''Feared''''' by Prince [[Alexander Monroe]] of Washington DC<br>
 '''''Just''''' by [[Elder Gregorio]] of Washington DC<br>

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 Max is a poor girl that was getting fucked up by a bunch of dudes doing what they do to defenseless girls in the middle of the night. I aint gonna elaborate further. Well I was hunting, and I get a whiff of blood and other more personal bodily fluids, so I round the corner to check it out. Turns out this group of kids finished what they came to do, and had just beat Max past the point of no return. They were going to kill her, so she could identify them I am sure. I just looked at Max dying there, and then to the three guys. They took this little girl's life because they wanted to get off. It was sickening. I remember wanting to vomit, and then the beast had a different idea. I still don't regret cashing in my humanity on those fucking kid's heads. When I come to, I am looking at this girl. She wasn't hot; she was just an easy target. I wasn't gonna let her story end like that, so I put some blood down her throat, to ghoul her, not knowing she already passed that point, and she came to in frenzy, and now a full blown Brujah. She still hasn't forgiven me for doing that. She doesn't talk to me much, and I miss her. I hope she comes home one night, saying she at least understands what happened from where I was standing.
 ]][[Image:Maybe Melanie2.jpg‎|thumb|225px|Melanie Dervish]]
-[[Melanie Dervish<br>
+[[Melanie Dervish]][[Image:Maybe Melanie2.jpg‎|thumb|225px|Melanie Dervish]]<br>
 Melanie on the other hand was a kid that still loves her daddy. I aint gonna talk about how I found her, but when I did she was all wound up in a Lilith cult trying to do shitty stuff to DC. We needed an in, so I ghouled her, and sent her back into the fray to give us information about where they were meeting all that jazz. She was down right pivotal in that cult being destroyed, so I kept her on. She is also a sado-masochist sex addict who is one of the hottest women I have ever seen who is completely enthralled with me, but that was only a small part of it. She stayed with me for a bit, and I stumbled across Right of Progeny, and she had been bitching about wanting to be a Vampire for a while, so I ran her through the ringer to make sure none of that Lilith shit stuck in her brain. She was only there for the crazy parties and rampant violent sex, and honestly, I completely understand, so I bit her, and we made it official. I took her under my Accounting, and she did a great job learning everything she needed to know. When she was Acknowledged, the dumb slut slipped up, and got put under ordeal by the prince for saying a comment about black people when the fucking keeper is black and standing inches from her. Now she stays at home till this ordeal thing blows over, and she can join the ranks of everybody else. I will be sad to see her go, but I feel like she will always come back when she gets lonely. <br>
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 Melanie is a Vampire straight out of the movies. She is a rock solid babe, who wears tight leathers and miniskirts. This chick loves the black motorcycle and Japanese swords mixed with fully automatic weaponry, and a side of crazy Kung Fu shit I never taught her. I swear she would give Kate Beckinsale a run for her money if they ever do Underworld again. Her cliché does get on my nerves sometimes, but hey I am a leather jacket wearing Brujah car mechanic; I can't be too upset about clichés without being a total douche.<br>
 ==Broodmates==