Mulciber - Revision history

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 ==Sire==
-None, he is one of the original sons of [[Alvusia]].
+None, he is one of the original sons of [[Alvusia]], "Dark Mother".
 ==Childer==
-[[Brandonn "Sweeney" Mackenzie]]
+[[Brendonn "Sweeney" Mackenzie]]
 ==Broodmates==
-[[Luma]]
+[[Luma]], "Stone Beauty"
 [[Image:Gargoyle_magic.jpg|300px|thumb|right|Blood Sorcery]]

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 |Position=None
 |Status=3 (1+2)
-|Domain=Vale do Itajaí, Brazil
+|Domain=None
 |Society=None
 |Path=Road of Service
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 '''November, 2021''' : He was appointed as Hound by Scourge [[Ânima]]<br>
 '''December, 2021''' : Started learning martial arts and becoming even more introverted<br>
 '''August, 2021''' : During his isolation, he develops a martial art aimed at Gargoyles, which uses natural gifts such as claws, wings and tails during brutal and dynamic combat. He named it Onigawara-ryu<br>
-'''January, 2023''' : Trying to rediscover his moral roots, he moves to the Chantry of Vale do Itajaí
 [[Image:mulciber_div.png|300px|center]]

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 '''Physical description:'''<br> A solid stone monster with green moss at various points on his surface, an 11-ft behemoth with deep eyes that shine with a strong crimson light.<br>He has immense chiropteran wings that make him even more threatening and his body has a carapace carved into his rocky skin.<br>
 The span of his wings, when fully opened, is 23-ft.<br>
-His wild features resemble that of a horned, fierce and atrocious creature with crystalline fangs.<br>
+His wild features resemble that of a horned, fierce and atrocious creature with crystalline fangs, black Lonsdaleite crystals cover much of his colossal structure.<br>
-His claws are as large as daggers, both in the hands and feet, an extension of his stone fingers.<br>He has long black hair that seems to reflect the moonlight, always tied behind his horns.
+His claws are as large as daggers, both in the hands and feet, an extension of his stone fingers.<br>
 He has a long tail, also made of stone and strong enough to be used as a weapon.<br>Despite his apparent bestiality, his mannerisms indicate how cultured he is.<br>
 When using blood magic, his body becomes dark and covered with glowing red runes just like his eyes.<br>

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 '''Concept:''' Stoic Warrior-Poet
 <br><br><br><br>
-'''Physical description:'''<br> A solid stone monster with green moss at various points on his surface, an 11-foot behemoth with deep eyes that shine with a strong crimson light.<br>He has immense chiropteran wings that make him even more threatening and his body has a carapace carved into his rocky skin.<br>
+'''Physical description:'''<br> A solid stone monster with green moss at various points on his surface, an 11-ft behemoth with deep eyes that shine with a strong crimson light.<br>He has immense chiropteran wings that make him even more threatening and his body has a carapace carved into his rocky skin.<br>
-The span of his wings, when fully opened, is 23-foot.<br>
+The span of his wings, when fully opened, is 23-ft.<br>
 His wild features resemble that of a horned, fierce and atrocious creature with crystalline fangs.<br>
 His claws are as large as daggers, both in the hands and feet, an extension of his stone fingers.<br>He has long black hair that seems to reflect the moonlight, always tied behind his horns.

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 '''Concept:''' Stoic Warrior-Poet
 <br><br><br><br>
-'''Physical description:'''<br> A solid stone monster with green moss at various points on his surface, an 11-foot behemoth with deep eyes that shine with a strong crimson light.<br>He has immense chiropteran wings that make him even more threatening and his body has a carapace carved into his rocky skin. His wild features resemble that of a horned, fierce and atrocious creature with crystalline fangs.<br>
+'''Physical description:'''<br> A solid stone monster with green moss at various points on his surface, an 11-foot behemoth with deep eyes that shine with a strong crimson light.<br>He has immense chiropteran wings that make him even more threatening and his body has a carapace carved into his rocky skin.<br>
 His claws are as large as daggers, both in the hands and feet, an extension of his stone fingers.<br>He has long black hair that seems to reflect the moonlight, always tied behind his horns.
 He has a long tail, also made of stone and strong enough to be used as a weapon.<br>Despite his apparent bestiality, his mannerisms indicate how cultured he is.<br>

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 =Overview=
-[[Image:Mulciber.jpg|350px|right]]
+[[Image:Mulmain1.webp|350px|right]]
 [[Image:Mulciber_close.png|350px|right]]
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 * '''Brave''' by Word of former Tremere Primogen [[Elliot Müller]] for defending the domain against Sabbat and infernalists
 * '''Loyal''' by Word of [[Sylvanos Vulk]], Prince of Joinville
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 He devoted himself both to defending the Domain of the Cruz Magna and to his studies of blood magic.<br>
+[[Image:Mulmain2.png|500px|center]]
 ==Timeline==
 '''1391''' : Born of Alvusia, he defended Ceoris with all his might. He was one of the Tremere enemy's main hunters and soldier at the front of the battle against the Tzimisce for almost a century.<br>

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 |Domain=Vale do Itajaí, Brazil
 |Society=None
-|Path=Humanity
+|Path=Road of Service
 |rating=3
 |p=[mailto:owbn.mulciber@gmail.com Rodrigo Lara]

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 ==Rumors==
-He is ancient, dating from the first Chapel in Transylvania.<br>
+He is ancient, dating from the first Chantry in Transylvania.<br>
 He devours the flesh of his prey.<br>
 He is the first of his kind to learn magic.<br>

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 [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0108783/characters/nm0202966?ref_=tt_cl_c_1 Goliath] - Gargoyles<br>
 [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt1418377/characters/nm2541974?ref_=tt_cl_t5 Gideon] - I, Frankenstein<br>
-[https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0969322/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_6 The Gargoyles] - Reign of the Gargoyles<br>
+[https://www.imdb.com/title/tt3315342/characters/nm0413168?ref_=tt_cl_c_1 Logan] - Logan<br>
 [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0829150/characters/nm1812656?ref_=tt_cl_t1 Vlad] - Dracula Untold<br>
 [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0401855/characters/nm0192889?ref_=tt_cl_t3 Marcus Corvinus] - Underworld: Evolution<br>
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 ==Rumors==
-He is ancient, dating from the first Chapel.<br>
+He is ancient, dating from the first Chapel in Transylvania.<br>
 He devours the flesh of his prey.<br>
 He is the first of his kind to learn magic.<br>

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 ==Enemies==
-Weaklings
+A few weaklings, but none alive today.
 ==Sire==