Scars - Revision history

BDH-015 at 19:09, 19 November 2018

2018-11-19T19:09:52Z

BDH-015 at 14:44, 7 November 2018

2018-11-07T14:44:23Z

LNL-003: /* Soundtrack */

2016-06-16T18:42:38Z

‎Soundtrack

LNL-003: /* Soundtrack */

2016-01-25T20:18:24Z

‎Soundtrack

LNL-003: /* Quotes */

2016-01-25T19:10:38Z

‎Quotes

LNL-003: /* Known History */

2016-01-18T01:59:09Z

‎Known History

LNL-003: /* Broodmates */

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‎Broodmates

LNL-003: /* Overview */

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‎Overview

LNL-003: /* Rumors */

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‎Rumors

LNL-003: /* Allies */

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‎Allies

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 Until the End, ''Breaking Benjamin'' <br>
 Criminal, ''Disturbed'' <br>
-Gun Lover, "Acumen Nation" <br>
+Gun Lover, ''Acumen Nation'' <br>
 ==Quotes==

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 Until the End, ''Breaking Benjamin'' <br>
 Criminal, ''Disturbed'' <br>
 ==Quotes==

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 ==Quotes==
 "..." - Scars <br>
-"Scars has my hospitality if he will try and be less boring." - Thomas Caprichoso, on taking Praxis of Iowa City <br>
+<br>
 "What's your name?" - Usually the first question Scars gets asked <br>
 "What clan are you, Gangrel?" - Usually the second question Scars gets asked <br>
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 "Do you know what that thing you are fighting in the PedMall is?" <br>
-"Yeah. That's why I told <b>You</b> to stay out of it." -Conversation between Marcus Bishop and Scars
+"Yeah. That's why I told <b>You</b> to stay out of it." -Conversation between Marcus Bishop and Scars <br>
 ==Rumors==

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 Scars came into Iowa City in September of 2012, without much fanfare. In the time since he has never held a position in the Court, although he has often been seen helping each of the various Sheriffs that Iowa City has had over the years, cleaning up any problems that enter the Domain. This has never been in any official capacity. Scars doesn't talk much about his past, but has told people when asked that the Scars on his face are due to a Gangrel, although he has never mentioned who precisely caused the wounds or why. In December of 2013, during a holiday gather held under the court of Thomas Caprichoso, Scars was given the gift of Domain over a bar known as Donnelly's Pub in Iowa City, which he holds to this day. <br> <br>
-From 2013 to 2015, Scars built a drug ring that ran out of his personal Domain in the PedMall. His reach spread far, but he soon came into conflict with the Iowa City Vigilante, thought by some to be a lupine. Although the attacks occurred primarily in Scars' drug dealers, the two of them are known to have clashed on at least one occasion, with both parties apparently walking away. <br> <br>
+From 2013 to 2015, Scars built a drug ring that ran out of his personal Domain in the PedMall. His reach spread far, but he soon came into conflict with the Iowa City Vigilante, thought by some to be a lupine. Although the attacks occurred primarily against Scars' drug dealers, the two of them are known to have clashed on at least one occasion, with both parties apparently walking away. <br> <br>
 At the end of 2015, Scars moved to Burlington, IA to manage the city for the Giovanni who control the territory. Concurrently, several of his drug dealers were killed and a criminal investigation among mortal police sought Scars out and dismantled his drug ring in Iowa City.

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 ==Broodmates==
 Jillian <br>
-Scars is known to have several broodmates, many of whom invariably make their way to Iowa City. At this time, Scars has openly mentioned over half dozen broodmates, one of whom was killed in a fight in which Scars was a participant and all of which are Caitiff.
+Scars is known to have several broodmates. At this time, Scars has openly mentioned over half dozen broodmates, one of whom was killed in a fight in which Scars was a participant. All of Scars known broodmates are Caitiff.
 ==Character Inspirations==

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 '''Physical description:''' The most obvious physical feature of Scars are four long gashes that appear to have been from some sort of claw, although the gashes are consistent with an ordinary human distribution of fingers. The gashes appear to have scabbed over, although they have not healed entirely and may occasionally bleed. (Flaw: Disfigured) Often seen wearing a leather jacket and blue jeans, Scars is often viewed as a menacing figure by those around him.
-'''Detailed Status:''' <br>Acknowledged by former Prince Pinky Wheeler <br> Diligent by Prince Amy of Mediapolis <br>
+'''Status:''' <br>Acknowledged and Diligent <br>
 ==Known History==

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	Scars sold a Camarilla domain to the Giovanni. <br>		Scars sold a Camarilla domain to the Giovanni. <br>
	Scars murdered another Caitiff in Elysium in full view of the court. <br>		Scars murdered another Caitiff in Elysium in full view of the court. <br>
		+	Scars has an army of Catiff at his disposal.

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 Pinky Wheeler (Deceased) <br>
 Harpy Clyde Bershire <br>
-Sheriff William Richardson
+Sheriff William Richardson <br>
 ==Enemies==