Vincent St. John - Revision history

BDH-015 at 20:18, 16 May 2018

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BDH-015 at 20:16, 3 May 2018

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STH-006 at 17:39, 4 June 2013

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STH-006: /* Known History */

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STH-006: /* Overview */

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 After many months of watching the city crumble to bits and personally using his wealth to rebuild it. Vincent started to wonder if the domain was being destroyed from within. Slowly, other Ventrue started to visit and stay in the city. With the help of his fellow Ventrue and a few well-arranged deals with other select individuals, Vincent successfully took Praxis away from the now former Prince.<BR>
-In May 2013, said former Prince Cross returned from the grave and ended up contesting St. John for his Praxis. Although Cross did not end up with the throne, he did succeed in removing St. John from his throne. Vincent St. John has recently been spotted in Atlanta, GA. Rumors that he has moved on from Griffin are circulating.<BR>
+In May 2013, said former Prince Cross returned from the grave and ended up contesting St. John for his Praxis. Although Cross did not end up with the throne, he did succeed in removing St. John from his throne. Vincent St. John has recently been spotted in Atlanta, GA. Rumors that he has moved on and is never returning to Griffin have begun to circulating.<BR>
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 After many months of watching the city crumble to bits and personally using his wealth to rebuild it. Vincent started to wonder if the domain was being destroyed from within. Slowly, other Ventrue started to visit and stay in the city. With the help of his fellow Ventrue and a few well-arranged deals with other select individuals, Vincent successfully took Praxis away from the now former Prince.<BR>
-In May 2013, said former Prince Cross returned from the grave and ended up contesting St. John for his Praxis. Although Cross did not end up with the throne, he did succeed and removing St. John from his throne.<BR>
+In May 2013, said former Prince Cross returned from the grave and ended up contesting St. John for his Praxis. Although Cross did not end up with the throne, he did succeed in removing St. John from his throne. Vincent St. John has recently been spotted in Atlanta, GA. Rumors that he has moved on from Griffin are circulating.<BR>
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 ==Known History==
-Vincent's history is shrouded in confusion. Some people report that he was first noticed in Spain in the 1400's, while others place his beginnings around the time of the American Revolution. The only solid evidence of prior history comes during the 1950's, when he started building up massive amounts of resources and influencial pull throughout southeastern United States.
+Vincent's history is shrouded in confusion. Some people report that he was first noticed in Spain in the 1400's, while others place his beginnings around the time of the American Revolution. The only solid evidence of prior history comes during the 1950's, when he started building up massive amounts of resources and influential pull throughout southeastern United States.<BR>
-When Vincent first arrived in Griffin, he was immediately made Keeper of Eylsium by the Prince. At the time, Griffin was a city full of those with martial prowess and skills towards violence. Vincent, noticing a lack of a Ventrue presence, decided to stay and see about owning the city.
+When Vincent first arrived in Griffin, he was immediately made Keeper of Elysium by the Prince. At the time, Griffin was a city full of those with martial prowess and skills towards violence. Vincent, noticing a lack of a Ventrue presence, decided to stay and see about owning the city.<BR>
-After many months of watching the city crumble to bits and personally using his wealth to rebuild it. Vincent started to wonder if the domain was being destroyed from within. Slowly, other Ventrue started to visit and stay in the city. With the help of his fellow Ventrue and a few well-arranged deals with other select individuals, Vincent successfully took Praxis away from the now former Prince.
+After many months of watching the city crumble to bits and personally using his wealth to rebuild it. Vincent started to wonder if the domain was being destroyed from within. Slowly, other Ventrue started to visit and stay in the city. With the help of his fellow Ventrue and a few well-arranged deals with other select individuals, Vincent successfully took Praxis away from the now former Prince.<BR>
-Said former Prince ended up taking it back.
+In may 2013, said former Prince Cross returned from the grave and ended up contesting St. John for his Praxis. Although Cross did not end up with the throne, he did succeed and removing St. John from his throne.<BR>
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 '''Detailed Status: <br>'''
 Acknowledged by Prince Dr. Abner Baker, Jr of Knoxville, TN<br>
-Influential by Former Prince Cross(Deceased) of Griffin, GA<br>
+Influential by Former Prince Cross of Griffin, GA (Deceased?)<br>
-Dutiful by Former Prince Cross(Deceased) of Griffin, GA<br>
+Dutiful by Former Prince Cross of Griffin, GA (Deceased?)<br>

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 ==Allies==
 [[Knox Devereaux]], Clan Ventrue<br>
-[[David Church]], Clan Gangrel(Deceased)<br>
+[[David Church]], Clan Gangrel (Deceased?)<br>
 [[Charles X. Taylor]], Clan Ventrue<br>